Monday 28 July 2014

First try at storyboarding




Tom's story board

 Storyboard for spray dispenser -Jordan
Storyboard for indoor planter -Yvette


Mike gave us some feedback about these in class, he said that Jordan's story board was good, in that it shows how the user relates to our product in an emotive way, (same as Toms') but maybe the man spraying in the field is not so relevant as our product is aimed at suburban home owners as opposed to farmers. He said my story board is too basic in that it only shows how the subject uses our product, it needs to go more into how the subject relates to the products- (their values, desires, perspective etc.?)
Our next story boards will take this feedback into account -yvette

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